Getting it

Remember how I'm attending ASU for my BSN? Well, I don't consider myself a great writer. I don't know if I would even say a good writer. Anyways, I tried writing my first assignment a few weeks ago and had Kyle check it. He deleted everything and started over. Yes, it was that bad. Since then, I have been doing my own work and I just have to share with all of you my most recent grade and teacher review...

"Great work on this proposal! Your objective is clearly stated and your document follows memo-formatting guidelines. Your prose is clear and well organized, your tone is appropriate, and all content is relevant to your audience. You also do a great job explaining what a neighborhood clinic is and why it would be beneficial, as well as being fair about articulating potential disadvantages. Very persuasive! Finally, your sourcework is detailed and credible. This is a model project. Great work!"

Did you notice that last part...This is a model project??? 

I received a 60/60 and I wrote the whole thing by myself!!! Kyle checked it over before I turned it in but didn't change anything :o)